Score: 2

"i guess it had to be made"

submission: Kanye vs Taylor

date: September 22, 2009

i guess it had to be made.
this is a lot like those cheesy ads you see on myspace asking you to fight a computer opponent or whatever, and has the same kind of shallow depth and really is more of a shtick to get a product or enterprise noticed than anything else.

Score: 6

"not a bad start"

submission: XBOX And PS3 Drama 2

date: July 24, 2009

not a bad start to a series. i kind of like it.
you ought to fix the stroke weight on the wii (iiW rather) near the end where it and the PS3 are standing beside one another.
also, it is unclear where the big red laser comes from at the end.

Score: 8

"very well done"

submission: The Space Game: Missions

date: July 23, 2009

very well done. fun to play, easy to learn. "missions" keep interest in the game high.

Score: 2

"overtly racist"

submission: Korean Missile Crisis

date: July 23, 2009

while i see no reason for anyone to get all upset over some 30-odd second flash cartoon, i found this one to be overtly racist.

the punchline is visible from miles away, and having to wait forever to get to it while a red arc crosses the screen is so tedious. The punchline (north korea exaggerates the power of their arsenal) is a good joke and i think it was a punchline that deserved to be made visual in a flash cartoon, but there needs to be better pacing. it should be 1-2-3 BANG OKAY we get it now get it OVER with already. And for a better effect there should have been more of a significant/absurd difference between Part A and Part B.

Score: 4

"needed more sight gags."

submission: iGot No iPhone

date: July 23, 2009

needed more sight gags.
i can't really criticize the song because you didn't write it. but overall the piece is a fair attempt at creating a visual experience of said song.

Score: 5

"minimal animation, but effective"

submission: Midnight Visit

date: July 23, 2009

minimal animation, but effective. LOVED the slow, bassy keyboard snyth. very reminiscent of adam philips and his non-bitey-of-brackenwood pieces. shows potential

Score: 3

"fighter porn"

submission: Bunnykill 4

date: July 22, 2009

a pretty straightforward action/fighting peice done in flash, and i can see it clearly involved quite a bit of time to create. i just hated watching it.
it is "Madness" with bunnies (god knows why) and ninjas, and i am not touting "Madness" for its originality (of which it no longer has any) but i'm just making a point. there are NO developed characters in this thing to give two shits about. it's basic fighter porn, and is overwrought with the most hackneyed plot devices, character design, animation technique, and choreography.

Score: 2

"pacing is too slow"

submission: Pencilmation #?

date: July 22, 2009

the pacing is way too slow

sound effects are a nice touch, but the pacing is way too slow and overly tedious. you ought look at stuff like Wile E Coyote or Elmer Fudd, which i think has a similar structure/premise to your cartoon (i.e. sight gags, mishaps involving props and other physical objects, lots of sound effects, and a story which revolves around the typical main character versus an elusive rival wherein the main character always gets hurt and the rival always survives with near god-like abilities)

Score: 5

"i like the pacing"

submission: TF: Revenge of the Lolin'

date: July 22, 2009

the pacing of this was good, quick and to the point. pretty well written and voice acting was very good. artwork could have been better, i mean i just get so sick of the same vague anime character design i always see on the internet; it's really a cop-out (it also lacks personal style.)

Score: 0

"why the brokeback mountain music?"

submission: Dimlight

date: July 22, 2009

took too long to get to the punch line

also why the brokeback mountain music? the dialogue could have been a lot better. look up sickanimation.com he knows how to do dick jokes.